Cooking Com Profile Take 2

This is very well put together. But, is she supposed to be standing? It looks as if she's sitting, on her hair.. I'm a little confused about that. I think it's very cute how you have the eggs and the cooking hat with a smile. I only gave you 4 stars on vision becaude of the hair and the shoes look a little boxey. But other than that i thought it was great! I gave you 3 1/2 stars on originality because everyone seemes to be drawing people these days. Technique I gave you 5. Very nice job! Impact was only 4 1/2 because the position seems a little odd. But great work! If you thought I was hurtful, PLEASE LET ME KNOW! i know what it's like to have a bad critique. Don't feel down about what I said. It's wonderful! I couldn't do half as good!
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